Couplet #4:
sed me//riti fa//mam cor//pusque ani//mumque pu//dicum
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cum male //perdi//derim,// perdere //verba le//ve est.
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I am so displeased with my scansion there, tried a few different ones on second line, this seemed best.
"But the modest body and respectable mind of service
when I have lost badly is gentle to lose"
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